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When Young and in Love

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   It's hard to start a story when you don't know how it started. But as a 15 year old girl severely wanting a boyfriend and your parents not knowing you like someone, well that's about as bad as it gets. But when Wyatt Wells asked me out all I could say was "Yes".
  When he asked me out my best friend Jess was next to me. Well lest just say she's never crushed on anyone. Anyway, Wyatt standing behind me wrapped his arms around my waist. As I looked back and saw him he said "Hey babe, why don't you and I go out Monday night?" "Yes" I say and he walked away. Where had that come from he has never hinted that he liked me before. But boy did those muscular arms of his feel good round my waist. Jess looks at me in some kinda weird way and I quickly say "Um don't tell anyone even Colleen she'd bug me about it." Colleen has always annoyed me when I told her I liked someone but I couldn't imagine what she's do if she knew I got my first boyfriend. She agreed not to tell anyone I trust her more than anyone. But now during the whole weekend I worried what would happen if my parents found out about Wyatt. They'd probably split us apart. But then I thought about Wyatt's warm arms around my waist.
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AbysmalEternity's avatar
Ah... Seems fairly rough. Could use a little sentence organization as well in my opinion. You don't give much in the way of being descriptive either.

But all-in-all, it was alright. I'm sure with practice you can make it much much better though.